Sunday, September 28, 2014

Six Word Stories

Bright headlights at night; Approaching fast.

Teddy bear in bed: Children absent.

Oh, the mornings we spent together.

My foolish mistakes were my blessings.

Idea of balance, threw you off.

Dawn of day; Impression of sunset.



1 comment:

  1. I like the way you used figurative language in your six-word stories because it adds another level of creativity to the poems. My favorite poem of yours is "the idea of balance, threw you off" I like this poem because it creates a really cool paradox between balance and unbalance. I interpreted it as meaning that when you have a set idea in your head of what something should look like, or when you listen to someone else's idea of what something should look like, it's hard to find balance for yourself.

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